Out, Over, and Across - Quotes Without Comment
The power of expressions plays an important role in
race, sex, age, politics, etc.Logic, emotion,
credibility, and humor are the rhetorical appeals. A
quotation may carry all of them. It may, for example, use
appropriate words, make sense, deliver on a promise, project
conscientiousness, be whimsical--or it may, instead, do none
of these and work against the speaker or writer. Typically,
within this context of persuasion--or lack of it--is an
expression (or metaphor, etc.), that works in subtle ways to
drive the words and their ideas, either positively or
negatively:
Many metaphors express commonly held beliefs and principles.
To Ben Franklin, being out of debt was a metaphor for
freedom, and the expression that he chose to say this became
a saying: "Be frugal and free."
To some residents of New York City, the Mister
Softee trucks and their repetitious jingle are a
metaphor for summer and delicious, soft ice
cream. To other residents of New York City, they
are a metaphor for the need for noise abatement:
The CREAM-i-est DREAM-i-est SOFT ice CREAM
you GET from MIS-ter SOF-tee.
FOR a re-FRESH-ing de-LIGHT su-PREME
LOOK for MIS-ter SOF-tee . . . |
New York State Comptroller Alan Hevasi said in a speech that
New York Senator Charles Schumer is "the man who, uh, uh,
how do I phrase this diplomatically, will put a bullet
between the President's eyes if he could get away with it."
Hevasi publicly apologized for his "beyond dumb, incredibly
moronic" remark and said it was "a very, very bad metaphor
to use." The expression, Hevasi said, was a metaphor for
"Chuck is incredibly smart, courageous, willing even to
stand up to the President of the United States."
In 2004, when his team almost won Superbowl XXXVIII,
Carolina Panthers General Manager Marty Hurney used a
different twist on the expression "been there, done that."
Said he: "A good number of our players were there when we
went to St. Louis and won and were there when we went to
Philadelphia, and I think experience always helps your
confidence when you've done something once and been
successful at it."
The Internet is a medium of words and images. To
control Internet hostility, Senator Hillary Rodham Clinton's
campaign hired Peter Daou, a well-known political blogger,
to use persuasive terms to get her message out, across and
over the Internet.
Marvin Kalb, senior fellow of the Joan Shorenstein Center on
the Press, Politics and Public Policy at Harvard University,
pointed out that reporters must be vigilant about what they
say or write because they are being tracked by blogs and web
sites that are solely dedicated to monitoring their every
word.
Anna Marley wrote the melody to "Song of the Partisans,"
which became the anthem of the French Resistance in World
War II. A member of the Resistance said to her that when he
was captured, "to give us spirit, we were whistling your
song." So emotionally powerful were her words that decades
after the war she was still being honored.
"A" (dismissively): "C" is a member of the kook fringe.
"B" (in response): No, "C" is not, and watch your language.
(The expression "watch your language" accomplishes all of
the following: 1. It mildly corrects and gently reprimands
"A" for insulting "C"; 2. It implicitly supports "C"; 3. It
implies that insulting "C" insults "B"; 4. It uses a facile
expression to silence further insulting; 5. It serves as a
springboard to expand the defense of "C" with, for example,
an animated explanation of the good qualities of "C").
New York Times columnist David Carr began a column on writer
Ann Coulter by saying that her choice of words is so
powerful that her enemies call her a "vicious,"
"mean-spirited," "despicable," "hate-monger." Carr ended the
column by saying that the fact Ann Coulter "is one of the
leading political writers of our age says something about
the rest of us."
When he edited American Enterprise magazine, domestic policy
advisor for the Bush administration Karl Zinsmeister took
out advertisements that sought "young" applicants. District
of Columbia laws forbid ageist ads. The ads should have
read, for example, "qualified" or "superlative" or
"enthusiastic"--almost anything but "young."
In early 1950's television, comedian Red Buttons had the
nation's teenagers using the expression "strange things are
happening," which came from his routine, in which Buttons
would cup his ears, sway rhythmically back and forth, chant
"Hey-hey, ho-ho, strange things are happening," and then
expand upon those "strange things." Fifteen years later, in
the 1960's, anti-Vietnam-war protesters on college campuses
variously chanted: "Hey-hey, ho-ho, hell no, we won't go"
and "Hey-hey, ho-ho, we won't go, we won't go" and "Hey-hey,
ho-ho, no way will we go."
The Two Most Rhetorically Effective Political
Figures in The United States
(Judged on the basis of one or more of the
following rhetorical criteria: logic; emotion;
credibility; humor; puckish humor; wit; moxie;
pluck; resilience; rhetorical charm;
articulation; appropriate choice of terms;
relevance; direct, forthright, straightforward,
commontouch style of communication).
1. Republican/Conservative/Right: Rush Limbaugh
(radio talk-show host)
2. Democrat/Liberal/Left: Bill Clinton (42nd
President of the United States) |
RHETORICAL ANALYSIS OF A COMMERCIAL AND ITS PROCESS OF
PERSUASION
KEY PERSUASIVE EXPRESSION: "What's the catch?!"
A number of companies, such as an Internet online company, a
sight-improvement company, an acne-treatment company, have
used the expression "what's the catch?!" in their radio
commercials.
In the print media, The New York Times picked up on the
trend in an article about healthful ice cream: "Creamier,
Healthier Ice Cream? What's the Catch?"
Typically, a "what's the catch?" radio commercial runs
along the following template:
A skeptic, "A,"
cannot believe the great qualities that the
good-natured announcer describes about a given
product or service.
"What's the catch?!," "A" loudly and
sneeringly demands.
The announcer, on the other hand, cheerfully
answers, "There is no catch," and goes on to
describe more good things about the product. Then
the announcer haltingly says, as if offering a
disclaimer, "But there is one thing--"
"A" pounces on this, saying mockingly, "I knew it!
What's the catch?!"
Then the announcer adds something else that is good
and free, such as, "We send you a free video--" To
this, "A," who, by now, is about to jump down the
throat of the announcer, reacts scoffingly with, "A
free--!," then stops abruptly in mid-sentence,
checking himself in a tone of awed astonishment,
"Hey, wait a minute! A free video? That's a GOOD
thing!" |
Rhetorical Analysis:
First of all, we don't like bullies, loudmouths and rude
people, and "A" is all of these wrapped into one. We feel
powerless and overwhelmed by a bully. We identify with
someone who is accosted by a rude demand that we feel unable
to fulfill. After all, we think of ourselves as being
nice and cheerful, like the nice and cheerful announcer. How
are we going to answer the loudmouth? We want to see the
loudmouth put in his place. It will serve him right.
The commercial comes to our defense. Through it, we get back
at bullies, loudmouths and rude people. It grows on us
favorably each time we hear it, as we anticipate the pivotal
moment when the loudmouth gets his come-uppance and is put
in his place and becomes a believer. That moment gives us a
warm and cuddly and self-righteous feeling. Appropriately
used emotion is persuasive power. At the end, the loudmouth,
ideally, repents and becomes what we want loudmouths to
become: a true believer in the product--a true believer in
us--a bosom friend. Each time we hear the commercial, the
positive relationship is reinforced, presumably to last
happily ever after. And lasting with it is a positively warm
and cuddly feeling toward the product.
KEY EXPRESSION: "hey, wait a minute"
The common-touch expression "Hey, wait a minute," used above
in the "what's-the-catch?!" commercial, is making the
rounds. In the "what's-the-catch?!" commercial, it is used
positively. In the following dialogue, it is used
negatively:
"Hungry?"
"A little."
"Then let's go out and eat--on you. Thanks."
"Hey, wait a minute." |
After football player Kevan Barlow was traded from the San
Francisco 49rs to the New York Jets, he told the Contra
Costa (California) Times that Coach Mike Nolan of the 49ers
was a "first-time head coach with too much power. He walks
around with a chip on his shoulder, like he's a dictator,
like he's Hitler. People are scared of him. If it
ain't Nolan's way, it's the highway."
Later, Barlow apologized for comparing Nolan to Hitler: "If
I could take it back, I would. I was very emotional at the
time. All I knew at the time was San Francisco. That's where
I started my career, that's where my house was, where my
home was. And I was emotional at the time. . . . I'm a
passionate player. I'm an emotional guy when it comes to on
the field and off the field. Sometimes it gets the best of
us. I put it behind me, and I'm glad to be a Jet."
In a speech, Senator John McCain, Republican of Arizona,
disapprovingly quoted expressions used by President G. W.
Bush, in order to amplify and encapsulate what McCain felt
were misleading statements made by the President: "'Stuff
happens,' 'Mission accomplished,' 'Last throes,' 'A few dead
enders.' I'm just more familiar with those statements than
anyone else because it grieves me so much that we had not
told the American people how tough and difficult this task
would be."
According to the Princeton Review's "Best 361 Colleges," the
top three colleges that prefer talking to partying are in
Manhattan: Eugene Lang College, Barnard College, Columbia
University.
According to "Men's Health," among the things that an
employee should never say at the office is: "My boss is in
over his head." Both the boss and the expression are so
powerful that they will inevitably meet and the one who said
it will be out.
THE NEW YORK TIMES reports: "Garry Beatty, the chief
executive of Earthlink, has an expression he uses to talk
about companies that, despite obvious flaws, enjoyed success
during the Internet bubble: 'Even turkeys can fly in high
wind.'"
For decades, Gunter Grass, the Nobel novelist, was very
critical of the Nazi Germany of his youth. But when it was
revealed that as a teenager he was a member of the SS, the
German language had the perfect expression to describe his
case. "Der Schreibtischtater" means "desk criminal"--that a
person who orders a crime from behind a desk or who knows
about a crime and remains silent is a participant in the
crime.
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